This is how U were today ....
dont take me as your whey...
u r making me go away...
(ouchy.... it hurts....)
the way u embraced me
'twas cozy but smooth ...
the moment I took a breath..
it seemed u were pushng me...
(just to keep me close)
i was loosing my balance..
when u whipped off those leaves
shiverring , shaking , just to get a feeling
U wanted me to be walking..
the clanging noise,
the pushing cart.....
when they moved on their own..
i giggled to my heart
u made me happy..
U were the Windy Wind...
stay close to me like that...
for i dont feel apart :)
what to say..this girl always gets personal with anything n everything. Alas..the better way to emote one's trueness is through what they write as poetry..good going..the art of personification is a rare reality..u have it..rock..
ReplyDeletewat can i say now.... ur thoughts r awesome:):):)
ReplyDeleteI think you have lots of hidden talent and we were unaware of it. These few lines can show your ability and talent.. Simply AWESOME poems.. Keep it up..
ReplyDeleteAnd keep writing...
Dear...a critic is a person who doesnt' discourage..but gets the quality ingredient to be enhanced....so lets start the grilling process
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